All Comments on 'Seven Tasks of Poor Carrie'

no. i doubt it! that was a wild ride. i liked the premise, though it bordered on torture!

Thanks for reading, and for the comments! Yeah, it did border on torture, which sometimes goes hand-in-hand with the non-consent fantasies. This is probably the only legitimate non-consent story I'm going to write, so I threw the kitchen sink at it. My other stories here aren't nearly as dark. Thanks for reading!

Very hot...touched a lot of erotic buttons with me. Not much into torture, but I kinda glossed over some of those rougher moments. Still it made sense in the story to get the boy and girl to do what the "officers" told them to do.

Liked a lot of the detailed erotic touches here. Can easily imagine myself as the girl or boy in the story. Very compelling. One of the better stories I've read on here recently! MenaTV

This story was absolutely astounding, it really hit my buttons.

Is there Any chance of a follow up of Tommy and Carrie, perhaps how they cope, recover, and continue? :D

You should do more like this, well written and definitely made me ridiculously horny.

Wow, that story really tickled my buttons as well, it was amazingly erotic.

My suggestion: do a sequel to it about how Tom and Carrie plan out a revenge orgy on the fake cops, where they torture them similarly what they experienced.