All Comments on 'Seven Years as a Wife'

Loved it

Great Story. Please continue it and maybe make it a little longer.

I liked the build up and can’t wait for part 2

Keep it cumming!

Please carry this one on, it could go so many ways

I'm very interested! Please continue!

What a nice start, please do continue!

yes please we want more.

Great stroy pls continue

Awesoms

yes please. i used to live near Potters Bar. i wish i'd met Simon

Nice story, liked the idea. Please continue maybe two chapters with Mark within the seven years. And after Melanie will choose to stay. Out of love and embrace her feminine side.

Marriage, adoption,....?

I love to be his wife

Very nice start, I think I'm invested in this story already...

Good read. Plausible path of a lazy man who has no ambitions and low self esteem. Women’s close are sexy and are why men seem to prefer a well dressed woman over a jeans and hoodie type. I look forward to reading your next chapter. Make me make you a favorite author.

Looking forward to next chapter. It was a beautiful story.

Please, continue!

Love it!

Please keep going!!!!

good so far :)

Great story. Maybe just a bit rushed, but your writing is otherwise great & I'd love to see more

Loved it!! Well done

Please continue. Great job so far..

Nice story Melanie I can’t wait for more episodes

nice start, would love to see more

great start. erotic

A nice story and looking forward to reading how it develops.

I loved it and I would like to know what happens next. There are lots of possibilities. Some minor spelling issues.

What a great story! Characters well developed, setting established, back story built, so much potential for further development. The averice of Mel/Mark affords you unlimited opportunity to continue.

Please keep the chapters towards the short side, it will allow you to develop more and not have too much baggage to retain.

'all of his possessions fitted into one suitcase. Perhaps 'fit' would be more appropriate ?

'one everything was in the machine' typo? Onceven

He knew even though . . .twice his age, he would not be able to overtake him' is he Mark or Simon? There is ambiguity in this sentence. Perhaps he knew that he could not overpower Simon ?

Sooo good!!!!!

Leanne you have done it again another fabulous story

Keep going please.

Please continue! Good stuff

Loved the story, you must continue!

Please, do continue!

I love the concept. Please write more.

Yes more please

You might as well continue, I curious to see where it goes!

great start

Yes, great story. Loved how Mark trapped himself or is convinced he has to do this. Now that he has sucked his first cock, he took a big step forward but as a submissive wife. This story is a little rushed but I like the simple soft approach. Great sexy story!

Wow thanks for the positive comments. I write for several sites. One said should build slowly to the sexual side of the story. Others say there should have been more sex. If I write a more detailed story no one seems interested in reading it. Part 2 has no sex, but Mel learns about her predecessor. She tries to sort out how she feels.

For the record, I'd do t for 2 mill. LOL

interesting start hope it conrinues

I like this story and want to see how Melanie's new life develops. I'm sure she'll come to love her new look and lifestyle as well as her husband's attention. Hope to read more of Melanie sooner than later.

There’s plenty of interest, so please keep going! I fantasise about what it would be like being the kept sissy trophy wife of a hot rich man!

I really enjoyed your story, it flows very well and I’d love for you to regale us all with how Melanie gets on during her seven year tenure. It sounds like a dream come true to me. 🥰🥰🥰

I enjoyed this story. I a one gurl showing interest. Does she embrace being Melanie or will she continue to have doubts. Lolz. For that kind of money I would be be his sexy toy for more than seven years.

Oh yes, please continue this story.

Can't wait for the next part... Keep going :)

She sounds like a lucky lady. Keep going. Hope she gets to experience the pleasure of ass to mouth and being plugged in public.

I would love to read more of this relationship. Sounds promising.

I have written and submited 2 more chapters. In the first she learns is given a makeover and learns a little about Stacy. (No sex in this chapter)

The second has Simon coming home from work and seeing the madeover Mel. He can't keep his hands off of her.

Wonderful story more please

This is a great storyline, Leeanna. Would a straight guy agree to be another man's wife, in exchange for some future payout? I myself, being alone and with little money, would do it. I'm already a discreet CD and have had sex with men before. I guess I have a price!? But would I agree to alter my body and make it look more feminine? I already know doing some things, other than implants are permanent changes! Also, I could tell friends and such I was only doing this for the money.

At the end of the agreed time, would I, or could I go back to being a man? Probably and most likely not. Maybe by then, I probably wouldn't want to go back! An opportunity like this would be something I need to say yes. If only there were men in real life that could make such a deal ! ???

Thank you Leeanna. Your stories always make me think of possibilities and hope that one day I could find love and be open about it. Time is running short though.

Michael.

Please do continue

Did Mark Melody enjoy getting a cock into his mouth the first time will he somewhere along the line yeah that's fixed up as he has to

Love the story, I wrote a similar story myself with crossdressing, I'm so glad there are other stories like that here :D

This is a lovely story with lots of potential, please continue.

Veronica

So excited to read the series now. I can't wait to jump on part 2.

Nice start!

I’m all in.

Wish this had happened to me xxx

Amazing beginning 😀😀😀😀👍👍👍

Good premise, definitely worth building upon. Btw, 200 , 50 pound notes is only 10,000 pounds, not the 100, 000 in the story.

And then he got smart and went to the police.

No because he was enjoying it!

One, take the money and run. Two, if you don't want to then the minute he sticks his dick in your mouth? Bite it off and end the whole charade. People never seem to think there will be consequences.

Sweet story, hooked me on the title! Read the whole story when I should have gone to sleep. Great ending. Jusy couldn't stop reading.

Hi, just finished reading this chapter and looking forward to reading more. Love the concept of choice. Thank you for sharing. <m>