All Comments on 'Seward Summer Internship'

Way to long.

The family dynamic was quite awesome. I wonder if Aisha would have ever brought Aiden into the fun if he didn’t catch them? Would have loved to see him get some more action like his older brother. Quite long but it wove together well though I’m surprised James’ proposal happens so easily with Jalen

It was long, as the other commenter mentioned, but I stuck it out wondering in the end if there would be more. I think the length had something to do with the lower rating. I will say that I never really bought in to the father's lack of doubt or relunctance as things progressed. I kind of expected a 'Loving Wives' kind ending. Thanks

Good read and I like the length. Continue the story a fun read.