All Comments on 'Sex After a Month Long Gap'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

3 Stars. The story is somewhat generic and rushed. Hopefully you'll improve as you write your next story. It's easy for me to sit back and constructively critique, but you just have to come up with better experiences to write about.

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