All Comments on 'Sex and Videogames Lvl. 01 Ch. 03'

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moriadnemoriadne9 months ago

I like the length of the chapters just fine. As to whether it is James or the System making decisions...... I can see the System setting goals based on the intensity of James' thoughts.

For example, simply admiring a girl might set a quest for flirting, while masterbating while thinking about another (mom, sis, teacher) might set a different series of quests.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Average so far.

Cool Idea though!

MyWritingSystemMyWritingSystem8 months agoAuthor

I don't know why but my updates spend a lot of time under the 'Pending' tag

Lord_JohnnyLord_Johnny12 days ago

I like how this was a little longer, but would love to see even longer. I know, the ever greedy. One thing that I'm wondering is if there is any point in the 'extra' health he isn't getting. If it isn't in some sort of extra pool, it might be worth not noting it down. Judt a thought.

That said, keep going!

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One day I woke up and saw a bright white screen before me stating: I have unlocked an ability called Writing System. Of course, at first, I was shocked and scared by it but then I realised what it was, it was My-Writing-System suddenly my life had turned into a game and I ha...