by MyWritingSystem
I like the length of the chapters just fine. As to whether it is James or the System making decisions...... I can see the System setting goals based on the intensity of James' thoughts.
For example, simply admiring a girl might set a quest for flirting, while masterbating while thinking about another (mom, sis, teacher) might set a different series of quests.
I don't know why but my updates spend a lot of time under the 'Pending' tag
I like how this was a little longer, but would love to see even longer. I know, the ever greedy. One thing that I'm wondering is if there is any point in the 'extra' health he isn't getting. If it isn't in some sort of extra pool, it might be worth not noting it down. Judt a thought.
That said, keep going!