Fun story, thanks. A few neat ideas which deserve developing. Not sure why the typos as they’re all ones any spell check would catch. You can get boutique right, but not boudoir. Perhaps you’re a Bud Light fan...
40 something male. Constructive feedback for stories is appreciated. Or just tell me what you thought. I'm back. Stepping back in slowly. Working again on Altered Worlds Ch. 2. Sorry for the time off, but Life just Lifed me right in the 4th point of contact, so writing has ta...