All Comments on 'Sex Kittens Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
spellcheck, plus editor

You could ruin a good story with '.. kept on trusting ..', when you (presumably) meant 'thrusting'.

Spell-check passed just means they're real words, not that it makes any sense. If you don't want to use an editor then re-read the story, at least a day later, before posting.

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