by movieye
STOP LEADING US ON WITH ALL THESE SHORT CLIPS AND GET TO IT. ....THANKS
I really like this series but your chapter lengths are getting shorter! Why?
This seems to be going the same way as your story 'My job as a model patient'.
In that you start, draw the reader into the story, than abandon it and start another one.
Why do you do it ? It just so infuriating. It's not exactly the best way to keep your readers happy either !
So please, finish off both of these stories !
Rapier
I think your story has many nice elements and is much more than a 'Wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am' work of fiction! If you write what turns YOU on, it will excite others as well! Forget the critics.
we understand that life happens. when you can get back to it please finish the stories.
Nice story, quite confusing early on with Dr. Turner no longer being a female fucking the subject in her van, till 2 stories later it turns into another male Dr. Turner. Then the story stops entirely. Not nice to terminate before ejaculation!!