Swipe to see who's online now!
- Erotic Couplings
- Sex on the Beach
- Comments
All Comments on 'Sex on the Beach'
by fantasycamp
Sort by:
- 3 Comments
Anonymousover 9 years agolittle over the top with the descriptions
some of the writing is a little hyperbolic - I actually started laughing. And spelling errors - oh! "all right", not "alright" bonfire, not bon-fire. There are others.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYour punctuation is off
The random additions of "..." and '...' were pretty distracting
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
fantasycamp@fantasycamp11 Followers
Swipe to see more cams!
story TAGS
SIMILAR Stories
Roommates or More?
4.72
4.3k
474
Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter
4.54
5.9k
331
That's What Friends Are For
4.81
6.1k
1.1k
Hadley's Cherry
4.59
799
43
Babysitter Makes Me Lose Control
More Stories4.43
1.1k
43
