All Comments on 'Sex on the Sand'

Well written, but extremely erotic. I particularly enjoyed the stranger licking at your enjoined genitals.

excellent story...

I love this story. I would very much like to have it happen to me!

Jo

Great story. I love how it just happens. Everyone gets more and more aroused and it develops from there, one step at a time. The stranger licking you both was hot, as was his sucking on you after you came. If it was me I would probably do the same while he was fucking my wife, maybe even lick the cum off of her after he finished.

To have the husband carried away in the heat of the moment, the way the wife was, would be hot. Great erotic story anyway!

Love this story. It's a favorite and I've read it several times. Still erotic and hot. Gets me very aroused every time

Just the kind of story I like to read. Very well done. A follow-on story back at the hotel would be interesting next.

Pretty hot until the guy-guy stuff otherwise it was great.

My wife and I have had similar experiences - she loves showing off. Thanks for your story - edsandy3@yahoo.com

Your erotica is top-notch. The way you balance sensuality and storytelling is impressive. Whenever I read your story, I find myself quickly immersed in the narrative. It's like you have a knack for hitting all the right buttons.