All Comments on 'Sex Shop'

by peteh57

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AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

I enjoyed your story a lot.

Will you being doing any more?

peteh57peteh5724 days agoAuthor

Yes. Veronica is drawn back and Adib, being the capitalist he is, puts her to work.

AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

Clever premise.

Nice back story. Not rushed.

Perhaps some investigation into how vibrators/dildos are used on porn sites would have proved a learning experience.

Surprised somehow she didn't try sucking the vibrator, and then Adib's cock to explore the difference.

Adib fucking her was far too fast. Too abrupt in starting. Rushing to get cock into pussy.

And you wrote: "All this bazaar behavior..." You meant BIZARRE. BAZAAR is a Tukish/Middle Eastern market.

Four stars.

thorbetthorbet23 days ago

A really good stroker with a degree of curiosity about how you got your knowledge about so many sex toys. Personal investigation and in-store browsings perhaps? Either way a horny read, thank you

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Outstanding!! Please do the sequel, it deserves it.

litewriter1954arlitewriter1954ar20 days ago

Loved this - very nicely done. Eagerly awaiting the sequel(s)

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Yes u should go fir 2nd part .

Call AdiB at Veronica’s place m let the fun continues there

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Had to take my wife late at night so no customers. There was a girl working at night she showed my wife the toys and used them on her jeans. She had to use restroom in back of store. They were gone for about twenty minutes. They both sucked each others pussy. When she told me that two viagra's and I pounded her pussy all night. Went back too adult store many times but she quit working there. Wife wanted more...

Tripper_DudeTripper_Dude2 days ago

Just read and found this to be extremely enjoyable read. Yes the awakening of Veronica and the lust for her pleasurable new life made Abid exploration of his own shop believable enough. Definitely would enjoy a sequel to this

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