All Comments on 'Sex Slave Ch. 04'

by Queen_of_Tease

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Violence without rhyme or reason

Confusing to boot. Did you bother to proof read this mess?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
good, but...

Good,but different. It needs a bit of proof reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
good but confusing

My only advice for you is proof read your stories two to three times to make sure that it all adds up. To be honest you lost me more than once, other than that everything else was good. Keep up the good work but just proof read your stories.

spankfunforspankfunforover 8 years ago
Women as Canvas for Exqusite Torture!

Nothing Confusing About the Beginning of Torture Administered by Expert Sadist's! Well Done! More Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
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Nice

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