by Queen_of_Tease
Confusing to boot. Did you bother to proof read this mess?
My only advice for you is proof read your stories two to three times to make sure that it all adds up. To be honest you lost me more than once, other than that everything else was good. Keep up the good work but just proof read your stories.
Nothing Confusing About the Beginning of Torture Administered by Expert Sadist's! Well Done! More Please!