All Comments on 'Sex With A Virgin'

garbage

To call this garbage or crap is to give it the benefit of the doubt. One of the worst, ever.

You're a woman you could do better!

This story wasn't a turn-on, but it wasn't meant to be. It's a painful reminder of how guys behave when they are lusting after anything in a bra. Although I was lucky and didn't have sex until I was much older (and wiser), I'm sure that if I were that guy I'd not have behaved much better. Keep trying, sexyvicki, because the grammar and story structure are good and you make your points with great conviction.

"Not a turn on" is an understatement but we dont all come here to be turned on as if we were light switches. Some of us come here to learn more about writing, some to learn more about people. You taught me something about both. You have something to say and you said it well. Thank you and keep it up.

An interesting tale. I might have enjoyed it more had the woman decided halfway through that she was sick of it, and decided to take control. Then maybe she could show him the ropes so to speak and then make a better lover out of him. Just my two cents!

Hey, not great literature...but I've been in this situation....very accurate description of how a sexual newbie can behave.

Are you through playing with your vulva lips? It's about time that you wrote something from a woman's point of view....since you are one.

The second woman I went to bed with said to me "Aren't you going to do anything to arouse me?" I was a bit

embarrased, but very grateful - she did me a great favour!

I enjoyed this story that seems like it actually happened.

It belongs in the Humor & Satire section. Then readers might be

more understanding of the author’s craft in describing boring

sex from a first timer.