by BloomBuddy
What was this supposed to be? It was anything but erotic or believable. Are you even out of high school?
That had to be one of the worst examples of writing I have ever read!
Evidently what was in your mind never left the tips of your fingers to whatever keyboard you were writing on!
Sorry for the anonymous comment but I have no choice with literotica!
THIS SITE IS FOR SEX ENTERTAINMENT, NOT TO BE GRADE, LIKE A DAMN ENGLISH TEACHER, I GAVE IT 5 STARS, I DO MOT CARE ...IF..
SPLELLING IS WRONG, GRAM WRONG...IT'S THE STORY THAT MATTERS.
IT IS HARD TO WRITE STORIES...
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That was really bad. I am dyslexic and I could see errors though out the whole story.
If you find it hard to right stories then don't write them or get a 12 year old to edit the story.