by TallMarriedMan
Fuck yeah! John needs to let go of his guilt more and allow mikayla to take control
Fuck yeah! John needs to get over his guilt and allow Mikayla take charge. Enjoy the thrill more
I wonder if Mikayla or John will use Vira to rewrite Kelly and Jenny's minds. It seems all they would have to do is imagine a world where Kelly and Jenny not just know, but support them and even are happy for our pair. What better way for John to cuckold Kelly than using Vira's power to make her happy for and supportive of him?
Overall the writing is excellent, the science fiction portion is good, and the timeline engaging. However, the fact that nothing new truly transpires within their relationship is causing the story to lag. The main character is being led by his emotions more like a teenager than a man. Also, the wife and daughter are too oblivious to the affair. In reality the only people who would be that unaware are egocentric people who only think about themselves. Though from the story it could be true of mother and daughter. Good work and thanks for sharing with us readers.
I was really enjoying this series. I hope the next part isn't exactly like the last two parts.
I don't think the story is being repetitive. John is slowly being corrupted to desire Mikayla more than his wife. It's a slow burn story and I'm super down for it! Can't wait to see more kinky situations where John and Mikayla get "caught" and start to enjoy it
It's going in an interesting direction! would love to know what happens next :)