by DkGy
fantasies are cool,but common sense is better.wrote by a 2yr.old.
Hot story - can't wait for the next chapter! Hope a gang bang is part of your series.
I think the author has portrayed a goddess. Vanessa is lovely, and vivid with flesh and soul. I love to read more about her, but I hate to see a gang bang on her. She deserves something better, at least.
I love the story but im sure i have seen this story sumwhere before
Oh jeez, this one is hotter than hell! Great detail, and written with plausibility, which makes it even better!
you are a very good writer, and this story was so hot, on to the next chapter for me
But your a punk who can only use date rape drugs in the story nope sorry i like my stories straight on and a lil fight not a few drug induced orgasms by an ass hole complete bunk i give up your a lovely writer but you suck on this category man up because drugs arent wassup just so you will know who said this Im Kitty
According to this story she is the mother of both the bride and groom and another daughter who shares her name. I despise grammar nazis but this was just too damn confusing taking away from what was an otherwise is a terrific story.
A black woman with blond hair? A date-rape drug is the best he can do? This story is a joke.