All Comments on 'Sexting Accident with Roommate'

Rush. Confusing. Syntax and grammatical errors.

Advising revision.

Thanks for the advice! I've actually been working on better grammar by doing some exercises on incorrectly structured thoughts. For example, I'll use your comment:

"This story is confusing due to the fact it is rushed. It has syntax and grammatical errors, so I would advise a revision."

Thanks for the practice!

Excellent story, I really enjoyed it.

Is there a follow up?

Great story. Would be happy with a makeover and/or continuation!

So it ends here?

Great buildup and pace. Loved the not-too-fast descent into infidelity. Shame though, since this story has joined the countless thousands and thousands of stories that ended and were never continued.