All Comments on 'Sexual Desires'

I like it a lot. It definitely made me hot. Please post more ASAP.

marriage is hard alone ,but to cheat is asking for divorce.

I know there's more and want to hear it.

The sickos and losers love it what does that tell you.

One starting the spin now.

When the husband arrange a little accident there will be nobody crying

closet cuckolds reading and spanking like mad, probably off to smoke a cock afterwards and maybe get cornholed, sickos for sure

She will be cheating within a week. Both of them will get caught at the club and get burned. Torched type stories are some of my favorites.

fucked up all are.

The wimp cucks and whores defend their own. What does that tell you? Swinging today Cuckolding the next day. How sad for the writer that they think this is erotic.

that the light bulb burned out in the closet - come out so you can read/spank/flame like all creampie loving cocksmoking cuckolds.

Proof read your crap. One can't hardly read this crap for the mixed up sentence structure and extra words.

The reader that reads every single cuckold story on this site and hates negative comments about its beloved cuckold stories or the readers that hate these sexual fetish freak of nature cuckold wimp stories and write negative comments? The answer? the reader that loves these stories and hates negative comments and is obsessed with jizzing on keyboards, it should really get a life and come to terms with it's status in life.

Great post closet cucky. One thing though, find the comma and period buttons on your keyboard and use them.

If just listening to her neighbor talking about cheating on her husband, is getting her to think of cheating on her husband.

Is she willing to give up her marriage to be a slut for other men?.

She must be one of those women that has the slut gene

Overall the story was good but it was lacking. The two areas I felt was lacking was grammar and details. For me the poor grammar was a major distraction. An example of where more details would have improved the story includes, "... his cum filling my pussy," what did it feel like? How did you feel when he filled your pussy? Such lack of details made the story an alright story to read.

a rage

That was a rough read. I'm guessing that English isn't your first language or you let the word processor substitute any word that was close. That's not how good editing is performed. And, if you take a little time, you'll find you can set up your editor to point out grammar errors.

The upside is that it reads like it was written by Ricky Ricardo, so it became a comedy around half way through. (Loved the line about her "ass chicks"). I appreciate the laugh, but most stories that people find interesting have some conflict in them. Few people, that you and I would want to know, just jump into bed without some conflict.

Basically very formulaic with sort of standard vapid characters and dialogue. What makes a story interesting are the characters...who hopefully have lives outside the bedroom - to make what's in the bedroom more interesting and complicated. I mean really, how attractive is a woman who 'has nothing better to do all afternoon' ? Couldn't this woman be fiercely into something; writing, painting, dance, martial arts, even reading (gasp)? I'm attracted to women - and men - who have some real 'leg' to show.

Somebody wrote If this stroke story would be a WHOLE STORY TO SHOW THE ALL LIFE. I think this would be an interesting charcter developing conflict the following, look at: Is Rick fertile? If does Rick want children from a other woman? If does he want children he will move for it ??? However This story only a stroke story for stroke story is not wrong but for me a stroke story is boring.

Unfortunalely true erotic stories are rarly and those stories not stroke stories. When I was a first time erotic story reader this story type might be erotic for me, but by the time to read more than 1000 similar only boring. If you want read true erotic, not stroke and full of movements stories I suggest more excellent stories:

From the SOL (storiesonline.net):Al Steiner "Aftermath" it is not a stroke story and erotic. From cmsix "NanoVirus", "John and Arden", "Alaskan Vacation", "Snatched". Unfortunately cmsix had a heart operation and stopped writting. Lazlo Zalezac wrote many stories in Damsels in Distress universe as "The Portal: Doorway To Adventure" the first and more stories (sequels) from this universe. Colt45 wrote "Sea King" and the sequels. From Lit in the Sci Fi & Fantasy 800Ibgorilla "A Beautiful Wish". Yes these stories all are fantasy stories, but I think for erotic story the fantasy is the best.