by silkstockingslover
Pictures are 4.5 stars, story 2 stars, but as this is an illustrated story, the pictures take precedence over the actual story.
"Awakening 7 Tasks" may be my top favorite story of all time, but this is definitely a close second in pictures, story, and eroticism! Expertly written as always!
Fun story, Jasmine! Thanks for sharing. Oh, and it's Garfunkle & Oates. :) And the song and video are freakin hilarious. Those 2 girls are hilarious and I have enjoyed them anytime they're in a TV show I watch.
Wow! I feel cheated only able to give this 5*, when it deserves at least 8 or 9*! Great pics, too.
Jacenta licked her to her first cum of the evening? Not quite! Anna had an orgasm from the Sybian. O.K., it was the first humanly induced orgasm, but not the firstfor Anna. Nonetheless, five stars! Toe sucking (even through nylons) in any part of a story always puts me in a generous mood when I rate a story.
And I'm glad Mrs. Walker got off again. I'd like to read about Anna and Mrs. Walker again! You could even include Mr. Walker entertaining Jacenta at the same time.
What a story and the art work was super! Just kept on cumin! and I'm oozing!
this was awesome story. you have a wild imagination keep it up i enjoy yer stories
Hi Everyone! I need to point out a typo in this story that slipped past me. The name of the actual folk duo mentioned in this fictional story is Garfunkel and Oates, not Garfield and Oates. You can find them on YouTube singing several outrageous and funny songs. Sorry about that! Tex Beethoven.
@legsfeettoes mentioned that Anna forgot cumming on the Sybian, but I think that's understandable. Loved the characters, enjoyed the revenge of self actualization. Nobody needs an untrustworthy lover.
The illustrations were nice but I think my imagination could have painted a more attractive picture.
WOW WOW FUCKING WOW - My panties are soaked with my pre cum. Fabulous story thank you.
I jacked myself four times while reading this story! And I enjoyed the photos as well...
Definitely one of your best stories!
Loved the different competitions and the pictures just added to it. Should be a 6!
Once again she has managed to create a totally erotic scene with a willing participant wanting to explore her sexuality. Her path to discovery through the challenges is brilliant along with her becoming aware of her hidden lesbian desires.
A purely sensual adventure.
As usual, another sexy, hot masterpiece. Anna sure learned a lot about herself as she progressed through each challenge, just as we did.
I always vote your stories a 5! Now this story reminds me why I do this1 An excellent fun story!
Loved this story. It has it all and lots of fun. The drawings were outstanding as well.
That is a definite Trick and many Treats! The drawings and story complemented each other so well! Mmm, am looking forward to the 31st now!
This was a nice story but it seemed a little like you had an issue with Asian people, and “shemale” is a pretty offensive term. They’re just trans women
More loving and tender than I expected from SSL and for a bukkake sex-room story. Kudos.
Good story, but I believe it would be better written in 3rd person. Also the epilogue doesn't flow with the story too well, it might be better if after the first paragraph you deal with how the ex-boyfriend handled things and kind of forget the slave section.
448. In the last room she says she hadn’t cum, but in the 3rd room she lost points for cuming. That can be overlooked in this wicked story. I would have liked to read more about Jay and his reaction and the rest of the fraternity since I assume they knew her pretty well.
Forgot to offer congratulations for the excellent illustrations. I think they were the best I’ve seen. Thanks.
Great story! Have you ever thought of writing a similar story but have guys be the contestants? That would be pretty hot too!