by yarnspinnerr
Again a good premise.
But too much of it is history, not new.
Blowjob from Gabriella was a good twist. But it happened like the start of a drag race.
Barb knew he liked Gabriella's ass and tits. There sure could have been some involvement with them before the blowjob.
And the blowjob was too fast. Too short. Some edging would have been nice.
(And you wrote LOOSE when you meant LOSE.)
Four stars.