by bayoujuju
It was a great take on the genre. I loved the irony of the last sentence. "...she was a human, wasn't she?" Incredibly clever. Keep up the writing.
Very sexual, very arousing, i saw what was coming (i'm alsoa big vamp/succubus lit fan) but even so it was immensely arousing and then utterly horrifying. Well done.
I found this story very interesting- it was short, to the point and yet the language was very sexually appealing.
Which of course made what happened to poor Andy all the more wince inducing- every man winces when he imagines his groin being stabbed, bitten, or otherwise harmed.
What I found best though was Lillys genuine horror and guilt- all to often the characters in these stories are completly cold and heartless.
As an avid Vamps / succubus fan i have to say this story was short sharp and very hot. well done