by EroticPenmen
An incredibly intriguing ending! Overall very solid, if a bit repetitive. I struggled a bit with her being humiliated without any humiliation existing. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens in any future installments.
And please, stop mentioning Greg’s height every other scene
This was such a fun read! The development was top notch. I'd love to see you delve deeper into Susan's hinting at the end there.
Could use a proof read but we'll done story, you should write a follow up! I got a little nervous on the last page you would skip over the how it happened altogether you left it that close to the end haha
I had my suspicious that Susan was the leader. Although it could just be she works for him and has authority, but I think the implication is that she's the leader. A sequel would be nice and could clarify this with certainty. Plus all those blackmails and sexual escapades sound fun.