All Comments on 'Sexy Charmer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So when did 'Emma' change her name?

5th to last paragraph -

"... It's possible that Ella will soon become ..."!

Mind, by 4 paragraphs later she seems to have recovered her name!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh yes!

Give Emma and Tim more time together. Maybe they can see each other naked AND give us readers some descriptions. I imagine say, muscular Tim with a bit of sexy hair splayed over that manly chest, just enough for Emma to trace her fingers through. It seems they belong together! Give your readers a chapter 2 please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
fine girl

She sure is SEXY. Where can I read the rest of the story?

chytownchytownabout 1 year ago

*****That was a fun read. Pilots have all the fun! Thanks for sharing.

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