by EgmontGrigor2020
5th to last paragraph -
"... It's possible that Ella will soon become ..."!
Mind, by 4 paragraphs later she seems to have recovered her name!
Give Emma and Tim more time together. Maybe they can see each other naked AND give us readers some descriptions. I imagine say, muscular Tim with a bit of sexy hair splayed over that manly chest, just enough for Emma to trace her fingers through. It seems they belong together! Give your readers a chapter 2 please!