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Anonymousabout 4 years agoDetails
I love the story, but consistency is needed in the small details. In the dog’s first scene, he is called Jackson instead of Bowser. During a sex scene, Olivia drops her sweatshirt on the floor with HIS pants. A paragraph or two later, she can feel his cock through his jeans.
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