All Comments on 'Sexy in Public Vol. 02'

Go Jamie! Loved every line!

Very hot action, described in delicious detail! Loved it!! Request: Don't use phrases like "population pudding" ever again - it's a silly euphamism that ruins the mood.

Please try to decide whether you're going to use the present or past tense to tell this.

I appreciate the feedback and agree, it's one of my faults as a writer. Anybody know a good editor out there?

Wow! Great story. Jamie's two lusty companions managed to hold off from blowing their loads a lot longer than I did!