by Smuttyandfun
I enjoyed reading your story and was happy not to have the flow disrupted by poor spelling or bad grammar, as with so many other stories.
The unfolding of the story was well put together and made this an easy read, honestly leaving me wishing I had a mother in law like that. Sadie was an enticing woman, to be sure.
What could have been fun at the end, just to stab the ex in the heart, the two sending Tina a picture of the new couple engaged in hot sex, both giving her the finger...
Yesss. Definitely. It had me engrossed totally. Enjoyed it, all the way thru.
A nice read, a fun story with good sex and a hint of more Sadie stories to come...
Wow - what a fun sexy rocking rollercoaster of a ride. Aphrodite's got nothing on Sadie - what a goddess! Thanks much *****
It is spelled e-x-q-u-i-s-i-t-e not whatever the hell you came up with. There were a couple of other misused words as well - "then" instead of "them", etc. Yes, you need to have someone edit your work. It will get you better ratings for sure.
This is my first story of yours I have read. Now looking forward to many more.
In chapter 2, Sadie, understanding that her daughter is a submissive slut, suggests that he offer Tina a very humiliating chance to get back in his good graces by servicing them both as a sex slave. Since this exactly what Tina wanted in the first place (she cheated because he was too nice to her) it works out well. Tina is regularly used, lovingly abused (just the way she wants to be) and perhaps even "pimped" out to his friends in ch3.
Pretty hot and a fun read. I hope there is a follow-up after the lockdown ends.
I love this story. Cheaters never win. U got to continue this story. Especially since Tina wanted to talk. The boss thing not working out. She needs to know mom slide in and took her man after she discarded him. Putting this story on my watch list !!!!!
Great little story, wish I had in-laws that provided that kind of support and came around more.
Why not finish the story? Tell us how Tina finds out how happy they are together. Rub it in a little.
Found you through the mature section, started for the excellent writing and feel rewarded how often you appreciate redheads in your work. Another great job. Thank you.
(4/20/2022) Okay..., this was way too short. But I see that Sadie has a valentine's Day adventure. So, I forgive you. But that's only if they stay together. Wifey can use the spare bedroom since she's been deposed by Momma and regulated to concubine status. Five stars.
Only had one M-I-L and she was not someone I would do no matter what. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Could have been a great story, but leaving out any description of the aftermath towards the selfishness of the stupid so-called wife and her scumbag predator just leaves it hanging and insipid. If you're going to write, take a stand for something. Make a statement, make your writing have some meaning. If you're not visiting some serious accountability on the ugliness in the antagonist characters, you're not doing well for your readers. The way you write it, you're just enabling and encouraging the female dogs to run around loose out there and think there won't be any consequences. And yes, just having her new fling not work out is not a consequence. This needs serious punishment on both individuals to give it any sort of balance.
No retribution, no justice.
No justice, peace.
Too bad he couldn't ut his son or daughter in her belly. She proved she's his wife, his REAL WIFE!! Please write another chapter, so we know what happened with Sadie, his real wife...