All Comments on 'Sexy Time at the Boardroom'

Very hard to read. The times takes you out of the story. Keep trying.

The story was quite difficult to read, which made it near impossible to become interested in reading. The dialogue was very choppy and the grammar was poor. I’d suggest submitting future writings to the editors for assistance.

I get the idea English isn't your mother tongue. As written its extremely hard to read. Get with an Editor for assistance? It can only help. Keep at it.

1 star

DragonRider55

I liked it! It was readable for me and felt like a porno script.

Clunky writing and the durations of actions were unintentionally funny. It looked like an attempt to write a porno script.