by austin_erotica
enough with the cliff hangers. lol Love it and can not wait for more. thank you for sharing. Mechmanas
You are so wicked and so cruel killing off such wonderful characters before we get the chance to really know them but I totally love your story LOL. Please write more and write quickly.
Why did Daminus have to die?!?! Poor Evelyn, to lose her soul mate like that!! This is such a sad chapter ;;
i think there is more too jon than appears and the three magi and the others are in world of pain
where is the next chapter? no more deaths please.... :) oh what can i do? you are the writer....continue please..... :)
this is the first anything that I've read that has made me bawl. I swear my eyes were streaming!! Can't believe you killed daminus!!
That was good. Very brave decision to kill off a character that was so heroic and likable. Puts me in mind of George R. R. Martin's excellent Song of Ice and Fire series. He too kills his characters regularly. Still I find myself hoping fervently that some miracle saves Daminus ( not sure if i spelled that correctly, LOL.)
the previous chapters were great. this one screamed desperation for some drama and tragedy, and it was awkward. i wouldn't be surprised if sophina and evelyn sleep together after all of sophina's anguished 'i-love-you's' in her mind and evelyn's need for comfort. pffft