All Comments on 'Shadow Demon Pt. 03'

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Writing okay

But the story seems to be short episodes thst I guess must be related. You need to introduce what led to the chapter. I do not want to have to re-read every chapter each time you add one.

You are writing this, so you know each part. This is not the only story being read so details get lost between issues.

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