All Comments on 'Shadow of a Doubt Ch. 02'

by Sir_Nathan

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WantonWenchWantonWenchover 19 years ago
Oohh fuck yesssss

More, oh yeah...definately want more...please Nathan?

<smiles>

-- Bitch

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
God Sir

Please write more, I cant wait to see what he makes her do.

~*~

hisemeraldhisemeraldover 19 years ago
More please please please!

Oh please Sir! More!

Thisis a fantastic story! Thank you so much for sharing it

emerald

E-NymphE-Nymphover 19 years ago
do you have to ask?

*laughs*

Yes Sir, more would be an enjoyable clit spasming read. As your other work has been so far. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

WyeraWyeraover 19 years ago
I'll be good

please, pretty please write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Speechless

smiling...as i know this may be difficult to fathom...i am without words...a little courtesy as i wear a deep blush...~*kata*~

greeneyeredheadgreeneyeredheadover 19 years ago
Inspiring

Sir Nathan ... thank you so much for sharing this story. I am new to writing and I find your work inspiring. I love the account of the internal struggle - keeping the reader connected to her exploding brain as she opens herself further. And of course, the promise that tomorrow is another day has me licking my lips with anticipation ...

MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmm

Green

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wow

that husband's got his work cut out for him.he's got himself one dirty,needy slut.i hope he uses her long and hard.thanks.

vampanyavampanyaalmost 15 years ago
So very distracting!

i cant concentrate on work now today. All i can feel is how wet i am. i cant wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wet

This one made me throb inside, the feeling that makes you know you are wet without verification. I identified so closely with this character. The approach you have taken with this story makes me feel like I am connecting with a close friend that shares my fetishes. This story has been amusing, arousing, and overall very satisfying. I have an Adonis of my own, and he knows how to work it when he is in the mood. Love this story! Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

i want more yesssssss more

luv when her sweet dress was rip

my panty is wet

how id love to touch myself

cant bring myself to do so

i sleep now

Anonymous
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