All Comments on 'Shadows and Light Ch. 12'

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roseNthornsroseNthornsover 16 years ago
woman

You're saying there is a woman involved in all this now?

Many twists and turns.

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Awesome!

Yet another twist! Cullen not fully dead? Wow. Fantastic update :)

TyreeTyreeover 16 years ago
Meow!

Erotic Horror 'Who done it' all rolled into one. More please.

trippychicktrippychickover 16 years ago
oh poo lol

isnt that just like a "monster" just cant stay dead lol. Good Chapter:) Cant wait for the next one:)

PetsAngelsPetsAngelsover 16 years ago
This is pretty good . . . .

I hope you keep up on this one - I'm dying to see how it goes . . . Please finish soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hand it over!

...Ive been totally inside your story, not untill now did I notice the cell has three unanswered calls...

Daym, you cant stop now, not here, that just cruel!

Exellent and innovative writing love the twists on, and inside the characters and their stories, the the gay scenes kinda uhm... well sat on a towel not to make a trail on my couch...

I want to read more! Woman stop prolonging the ache you're just being mean *giggles*

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
plz write some more

plz plz write more hurry plzzzzzzzzz

TricialenTricialenover 16 years ago
Clever and Snickey

It started out slow and a little confusing, but it grew into an intriging tale and now I can't wait for the rest.

My only complaint is that with all that Isabelle went thru, I am very suprised that she would so readily think of Ian in a sexual way. I can see her relying on him for comfort and safety, but not romantically or sexually, not yet. But that's just me.

Otherwise it's very good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
So into this story....

But now, I want to take a crowbar to this new villian's face. That in itself says this will be a spectacular story. Now I have to finish this pile of papers post haste so I can get back. *begridgingly heads back to the woodpile.* Well done!!!

-LL.

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