All Comments on 'Shadows in the Light Ch. 01'

by Kaneda_Shinaro

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow.

Very well written and very sexy erotica (not porn). The Captain is hot and I like that he's not a 20 year old Greek god with a six-pack and a 10 incher. More of this story would be nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great start

would like to find out more about the characters. Hope we get into that in the next chapter.

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