by AlwaysHungry
Seems a bit like Art Crumb wrote a story. Well written but not my thing.
BTW : i 5-ed !!!
What a sexy romp, weaving the two story lines together. Fun characters, a pinch of mystery, a dash of police procedural, and a large dollop of the hot and heavy. Well done!
Very well done. I really like the story lines. No crazy leaps big holes, flows well, and, DAMN SEXY.
Very well written, and seamlessly interspersed with just the right amount of intrigue, drama, and sex. Excellent job.