by AlwaysHungry
Very well written, and seamlessly interspersed with just the right amount of intrigue, drama, and sex. Excellent job.
Very well done. I really like the story lines. No crazy leaps big holes, flows well, and, DAMN SEXY.
What a sexy romp, weaving the two story lines together. Fun characters, a pinch of mystery, a dash of police procedural, and a large dollop of the hot and heavy. Well done!
BTW : i 5-ed !!!
Seems a bit like Art Crumb wrote a story. Well written but not my thing.