All Comments on 'Shaking Things Up'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome Read

I love how filthy it got! Excellent detail and exremely hot...so wet right now..Love it. Please do another with them

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wfe

I still don't get a husband letting other men fuck his wife even if as in this case she wanted to experience very rough sex, with more practice the couple could have attained the right level the selves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
loved the story

I loved the story. Well written and raunchy. Would love to read another chapter with this couple.

ProfDavrosProfDavrosover 7 years ago
Surprise

Nice crafting of the surprise ending. Interesting action, although I still get a squeamish reaction to unhealthy actions like alternating fucking between pussy and anus.

I wonder what the payoff for hubby will be in the next story? Multi-woman action on him, tied up?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Very nice story. Great twist to the ending.

Soma99Soma99over 7 years ago
Enjoyed it

I enjoyed the build up and the payoff.

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