All Comments on 'Shall We Play Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Bros to the endand tbat end is in sight

Because they are both about to be single again.

Greyheaded1Greyheaded1about 5 years ago
4* Good Plot but everything went too easy

First time swap went really easy with no concerns for spouses or anxiety. Not surprised Amanda is scheming. I have some understanding of wives characters and motivation but husbands are not developed characters. I just know them as horny guys that like to fish.

Thanks for the story.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 5 years ago
USS

Ugly. Scheming. Skank

Made This Tank

That's A. Pain

You. Got. Game

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This time it's a pair of willing cuckolds.

Just ridiculous. And they NEVER have second thoughts about their swapping. Like nothing will change in their relationships. You didn't think that part thru. There will be repercussions. You simply ignored them in this all-too-pat story. I found it hard to believe he ignored his wife's first dalliance. This whole thing just didn't ring true.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Of course open promiscuous marriages are superior to monogamous marriages, that's why they are so common.

Hell, everybody in the neighborhood is fucking my spouse, so why shouldn't I? Marriage vows are for losers. Just look at all the bored miserable people who are married for years and years. Fiftieth wedding anniversaries are almost always sad mournful occasions.

Yeah, this author and his fans have it exactly right. This is the perfect way to conduct a marriage. Darwin loves it. Going, going, gone.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

A doomed bunch. There are dangerous secrets from all four and sneaky tricks plus one couple with an affair that hubby let pass and his wife don’t even know he knows

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Why not?

Our lives are filled with things others might not believe and one can't print every word or feeling.

Keep writing.

OlFrog14xOlFrog14xalmost 3 years ago

Is Amanda hungry for "real strange", or just jealous of Alissa?

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