All Comments on 'Shall We Take Him Home?'

by mickthetrick

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it ...

Been there ... done that! Great isn't it? Keep us informed as you go along.

RonventuresRonventuresover 12 years ago
Loved it, too!

I've had similar experiences, but they weren't as successful as yours because my partner couldn't bring herself to talk about them which made things awkward. I have always wished that she could have been like your wife.

Obviously the writing needs a bit of editing to finish it properly.

ErotonautErotonautover 12 years ago
New beginnings

Interesting story of a couple secure in their relationship. (Incidentally, there's some kind of hiccough towards the end of the first page, as the story begins to repeat itself.)

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