All Comments on 'Shalyn's Story Ch. 02'

You have left me confused. I'm left feeling like you only submitted part of this chapter. What of this chapter makes me want to come back and read chapter 3. What confuses me the most, is that I see promise with your writing style, and yet I still don't know where the story is headed. I will give your story another try and read chapter 3 when it posts, but please get to the theme or heart or whatever you want to call it of the story. I'm just having a hard time finding something to follow with this one.

Again this is only my opinion. And don't judge your writing career on what I might say. Keep writing if it makes you happy.

this shows great promise but there is no real meat to the story. You have good detail and depth for your characters. will read the next one but i am losing interest a little. and this is my opinion you should wight for you and to enjoy it.