All Comments on 'Shaman Chronicles Ch. 04'

I am really enjoying this story and this chapter in particular. I just wish you posted more frequently.

This is a really god story thank you for sharing. I also really liked that little plot twist at the end nice touch. Mechmanas.

Please continue

Thanks for sharing.

this story. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for posting!!

Great, looking forward to lots more soon I hope.

I am enjoying the story. I do hope you continue with it. No offense to your editor, I am assuming that English is not yours or his/her first language. There are many syntax errors and punctuation errors. Though I (and I am sure most of your other readers) am able to read what you intend to say and not how you say it, I would encourage you to search for a second editor that can further proof read your chapters before you post. Thank you for an entertaining story. I look forward to seeing what becomes of the young mage.

DJ

Continue this story.

Absolutely marvelous story. Love the plot immensely! Please keep the chapters coming. The anticipation is eating me. Can't wait for your next instalment!!

. . . better/smoother !