All Comments on 'Shameless Acts Pt. 01'

every teenage boys wet dream, 10 inch cocks and huge tits, sorry but you lost me there.

Like it, can't wait for the next chapter. AAA+++

Nice start. Your story improves as one reads further on. Look forward to the next chapter.

Terrific start! Can't wait for more installments.

would there be involvement of the father? I hope not.

I don't read silly shit. The average vagina is 4 to 6" long stretchable a little, perfect for the average 5 to 6" cock. An 8" cock is very big and that should be the absolute limit is these stories. I dump any story that forgets and becomes, just stupid...

Stopped reading at the 10" dick part ....geesh, get a life. Less than .014% of all males are over 8inches, with average being 6"

Could of been a great story, but now will never know.

another 10" dick story. Stop already.

butifull

I couldn't get beyond the four paragraph. The author kept reiterating the obvious. BAD FORM!

The character's relationships and ages is original, but the plot of a guy whose dick size can only be handled by a family member has been done already. A shame.

Oh man! What a wonderful passionate story. Please more.........

A little cliche, but in this genre what hasn't been done before ..... liked the spiritual aspect don't see that very often .... don't worry about the haters you can't please everyone .... patiently waiting for next chapter

She needs to play with his monster again, rubbing her slick wet cunt against him till he slides into her after eating her juicy pussy and sucking her cunt lips.

couldn't get into this one AT ALL.

here's why. Came across as near clinical with an endless short changed play by play like at a football game or something. Equally not enough well meaning and attention grabbing story elements at the start. Prime example of something that will get people to read the story?

"The creature crept."

There's you an example. It plays on the human curiosity and makes the potential wonder what is going on with just those 3 words. When you play to curiosity you'll have more readers than you know what to do with but there in some times you can't answer the riddle of what you drew them in with.

An excellent start. Please continue!