All Comments on 'Shane and Carmen: The Novelization Ch. 21'

"...Carmen's asshole really wasn't all that tight, and it certainly wasn't as tight as the asshole standing next to her."

"...Me, I could never leave Texas. I was born there, and I'll die there."

Not soon enough, Shane thought to herself."

LMAO... This chapter is like the comic relief scenes in Shakespeare. And this novella is so well written, old Willy the Shake himself would probably have enjoyed it.

Your writing is good enough to go mainstream if you are willing to live by the conventions of the publishing trade. Actually, I suspect you are a pro, and this is where you do your catharsis under a nom de guerre ("nom de plume" doesn't quite capture it)

agree..chuckles all around :)