All Comments on 'Shards Ch. 02'

It is very complicated in its inception and will probably stay that way for awhile. If you want it to stay a more manageable story you should consider having the facts a tightly held secret. Once you let it out it would be difficult to keep it from spiraling into a much bigger story.

Either way I am looking forward to what you decide to write. Thanks for sharing your story.

Great so far please keep it going

Fun read, makes me think! Five stars!

Please write more stories about me. Thanks!

would internal balls higher temp reduce firtility and birthrate / overpopulation problems? the mind reading sex will be fun know what is good or not