All Comments on 'Sharing a Bedroom with my Sister'

by chris99999

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Frankie1952Frankie19528 months ago

Hope aunty hasn't heard whats going on and demands the same.

shadrachtshadracht8 months ago

I'm a little torn on this one - what was here was good, but it feels like there's a lot you could have fleshed out that would have made this great. There is no information on why the sister flipped. There's alternating hot and cold from the Aunty with no explanation as to why she seemed pleased with him after the first "hand stuff" night with his sister. No real covering of feelings on either side. You both say you shouldn't do it, but then you do, and there's no real covering of that conflict internally - you tell us it exists and you just do it anyway, but you never really show us at all.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey8 months ago

I liked it! 5 Stars. I bet the aunt wants some Vitamin D from him.

HDblackheartHDblackheart8 months ago

Not bad I loved it now I'm hungry to hear it again but with him staying in his room with the aunt

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I'm with you Frankie, we could have made it a threesome.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Pretty good, better than most of the nonsense here.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

When are you going to write the next instalment. After all there’s an Aunty as well!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Totally agree with shadracht

dikupinyadikupinya8 months ago
great start

please continue

jafo81jafo818 months ago

I think you need more to this story may the aunty get some

thebigadriverthebigadriver8 months ago

You could definitely do more on the story pretty good start

Thom44Thom447 months ago

Well Done. This was a great read.

AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo7 months ago
Realistic story of love

Sometimes the ," Seminal Moment " occurs because of unusual circumstances. So well told with a perfect pace.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A good story and so close to the happenings of myself and my sister when we were in our teens living at home with mom and dad.....

Bucks7T2Bucks7T27 months ago

Exceptional, please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good start, but room for so much more. Develop it and you may have something there.

dreamer31adreamer31a4 months ago

Keep cuming I am ready for more

dreamer31adreamer31a4 months ago

Lucky brother more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I loved it!!! I never had a sister, but always fantasized about how we would have got along! I'm pretty sure it would have been great!

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