All Comments on 'Sharing a Room'

by KurtWaldman

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beachboy76beachboy76over 1 year ago

If the criteria for a good story is making the reader hard, then this was a great story. Thank you Sir!

ShortyMacShortyMacover 1 year ago

That was such a freaking HOT story, I hope that you continue with this storyline. It was well written and erotic. I could see myself as one of the characters. I give you and the story 10 stars

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this. Sexy and more than a little romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

“Two old friends find love”… I was not expecting both of them to be happily married to “a great guy” and “a great woman”. Description should be “Two old friends cheat on their partners”.

Sounding22Sounding22over 1 year ago

Such a great story of love. Got a very good friend for a long time I need in me. He thinks he’s straight for now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm kinda tired of the "I hope you don't mind of I sleep naked" trope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why did you choose to have them both happily married to others? If you’re happily married you wouldn’t immediately fall on your long-time friend’s cock or happily accept that your childhood straight friend is sucking you. There would be some conversation, some build-up, some motivation to cheat on your committed spouses. Some acknowledgement that the straight friend had bi-curiosity. If they had been single and available, this would have been a much better story. These two friends didn’t find love, they just sucked, fucked and cheated.

HornyVirgin_19HornyVirgin_19over 1 year ago

This was not great. There was no build up at all and the plot doesn't make all that much sense. I agree with the other comments below

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