All Comments on 'Sharing a Room Ch. 06'

We share and admire your sexual language, writing much as you do about the beauty of what some might call depravity but we believe is sexual truth. Your descriptive talents are first-class, the tension of sexual heightening well narrated, and overall, excellent and highly provacative porn. You hit a bullsye for us with the emphasis in this story on "wide-open" fucking; something we enjoy in special ways.

Look forward to reading more of you, now that we've discovered you.

I echo irvlyn's comments and add that I adored the realistic writing and very believable descriptions. They mirror many of my own, although anal doesn't

Have to be painful. Done very slowly and carefully, it is very enjoyable. Mmmmm. Can't WAIT for more!! Regards, ..Tim

Many thanks for the encouraging comments and positive votes.

@tim4522 - I get what you're saying about anal not having to be painful; it just so happens that is how Terri likes it. But maybe, just maybe, a final chapter will include some anal with less pain.

@irvlyn - Glad you like the descriptions and the sexual tension. Let's see if we can't work at least another reference to "wide-open" fucking in the final chapter.

Both Lisa and her husband are really sick humans...trouble is they are really fucking up another couple with their twisted and warped minds...but I did get a laugh when he had to ask his wife's permission to have a shower. Now who is the submissive?

@anon - where you see two fucked up people, I like to think they are two people in love exploring their sexuality in non-traditional ways, involving others who are also reaping the benefits of their debauchery. Glad you got a laugh but perhaps not for the reason I had intended when I wrote it. Thanks for taking the time to comment; hearing others’ views helps improve the writing, I hope.

This story started out great but went downhill. This chapter seemed far to clinical and bizarre to be sensual or erotic.

I really like your writing and the characters. However, in this chapter it seemed like the husband was the one that was doing everyone else a big favor, which really should not have been the case. He satisfied the young nymph, he lets his wife enjoy a big member, he lets the other husband enjoy his wife, he let the young wife swallow his cum. It was written as if he was this good guy that was sacrificing something for everyone else, which was absolutely not the case. I really like your descriptive writing but be careful not to give to much emphasis to an undeserving character.

Thanks, anon, for the comment. It is hard sometimes to balance the focus of the story, particularly when it is told from his point of view -- undeserving or not