All Comments on 'Sharing Body Heat'

Nice. Hope for second part

Kinda sad. The brother seemed like an ass.

All brothers and sisters should experience such unencumbered sex.

hope the baby is normal..

To short, no build up and it could have been a good read.

It was a very nice story, quick to the point, a good quick read is always nice in my book. I am sure that a future chapter is on the way when brother comes to visit, at least I hope so, would like to see where you might take this.

actually the author sounds like an ass, both stories contributed he takes the line of pregnancy as being the only path to conclusion.

Interesting 🤔

Basically...

My brother and I were home alone. We fucked. He came in me. I got pregnant. The end.

Pregnancy ruined it for me. 3

Not a bad story, if thin on details. Decent narrative flow. Missing are things like who these people are, what their relationship is like normally, and how their parents managed to construe a girl straddling her brother under a blanket as "watching a movie." That he would break off talking to her off after sex implies that there's a lot of drama left unexplored.

How many gallons of pre-cum? five? six?

I love the pregnancy part. To knock up my sexy sister would be a dream.

Bit sparse. Good effort

I think the author has potential but the build up was a bit quick and I agree that the brother is an ass, moving away with his girlfriend.

Short, but good. Brother should be told they made a baby so he can give financial support. Could they, would they, try to make something work?

May I ask for a second part? This is too good!

Hot!

The only thing I didn't like was that she didn't want an abortion. If there was a reason why she couldn't, like her parents being controlling religious kooks, or the laws against abortions in many countries, the story would be 5 stars.

A job well done he put one in her the way it should be 5 stars

Wow, that was short and sweet. I would love a follow-up to this one. :)

Meh. Not bad. Not great...but not bad. Truth be told it's a little rushed and the characters aren't fleshed out enough. But if you're willing, a part 2 that goes a little more indepth could fix this.

this was pretty good, could use a follow up of the brother finding out and figuring out what they will do.

Definitely needs a chapter 2

Damn even the end was cold lol, nice story