by Nutbutterbish
great story I do like daddy's fucking his daughters stories just wish I had daughters to use that way
That was painful to read. I don't know why I even try to find someone who can actually write on this site. It's filled with garbage.
Can’t believe the same author wrote both parts of this story. Part 2 was decidedly better.
I gave 2 stars to part one and 5 to this.
Five stars. Great hot story. Enjoyed it. Part 2 was very elaborated. Wish you good luck.
the point of view swapping did take away a bit from it.... but mmm,,,,part 2 was def better..... ;-)
Not sure if its just me. I dont mind the point of view swapping but you seem to have quite a few areas where you mix up characters Maya and Taylor. Makes it really hard to follow along.
@NaomiPartyGirl @rotorwash82 @Left2right Sorry y'all, I probably got way too excited while editing. 🤗 my mind was gone. Thank you for reading anyway ❤️🙏 seriously, you all are the best. I am trying to proofread better and get my stuff in order.