All Comments on 'Sharing John Ch. 02'

Well written w/suspense and surprise. And very sexy, in particular the handjob part.

Well done. You should write more.

Waiting for chapter 3

This story pushes so many erotic buttons for me. Very hot. Please continue. What happens next? We know she has to have John again. What about her boyfriend? Does he have bisexual desires for John as well. Please keep writing!

Good images form from the prose. Would definitely like continuation

When she came into the bedroom unsure of his reaction I could feel the tension in the air. After all she had another man's cum on her. It wasn't fantasy any more.

This could have been a super hot fun erotic sharing story..but oh NO..author had to go ruin everything by having him go to a separate room..they couldn't even enjoy the pleasures together...so this became loaning her out instead of sharing ... No stars..not even worth voting on since they weren't together

Wow - your writing reaches and maintains such a soaring high level of sexual anxiety! Need more!