All Comments on 'Sharing Mom...with Dad!'

Loved it LC68! Think about doing more stroke stories like this. It was really hot!!

Another 5 star story from you. Next story, who cares, but I do enjoy mother-son, especially with a preggo ending. I know, I am a closet pervert, but hey this is Lit ya know!

great story!....i was hoping dad and son would get so horny that they would stroke and suck each other too!

beautiful........moter son please

And mom/son please!

I would like to read how the shower encounter will go.

Shower sex is a fetish of mine.

But as stated by another reader here, "You write it, I'll read it".

I will say that I would have preferred the son's seduction by mom, first, without Dad.

I'll vote for another mom/son story !

Thanks Don

Again an awesome story

For someone who came across as unsure of how a stroke story they wrote would turn it, seems you knocked it out of the park. I too would like to see this mother and son have an encounter with just the two of them-maybe dad has an out of town job and gets held up coming home and Derek needs to step up and take care of mom on his own for a couple nights.

Mother/son story

Very well written. Had to finish it in one sitting. Mom and son are my favorites.

This one had the added spice of dad as well for a threesome.

Mother and Son by all means.

Awesome story, as always. Looks like I'll be in the minority but I'd rather see a daddy/daughter one from you next.

Enjoy playing with myself as I read. Can't wait to check out your other stories.

5 stars

like next story mum son

Why not really go out and do Mom/Son/Daddy/Daughter. I'm quite sure with your talent you'll figure out how to please all your viewers!!!!!

Great story. Tough love can be fun! Lets see daughter-Dad next. going to check out ur other stories.

One of the best ever. For your next one, I think the combo would be great. But what ever you decide, I'm sure it will be equally well done.

Super hot and very well written. Thank you very much.

MORE OF THIS STORY AND SEE WHERE IT GOES FROM HERE. Mother son next please

Vote for mom/son.

Excellent story as always, although I found this one extra special. Thanks for writing.

Everything I Read from You is wonderful, Thanks for letting us enjoy your stories!!

This story just didn't grab my attention like your previous entries.

good story I like daddy daughter

Mom/son

You definitely have enough material for part 2! I can't wait for your next story.

Vote for mom/son.

Request? Hot mom wants her son, under the tree, for Christmas.

Yes Virginia there is a Stroke Writer. Very please with this oh so implausible story. It was fun and a good graphic read. Five stars through and through

Met your objective but my preference is in the build up which in my opinion is much harder and a lot more sexy. Still thanks for the effort and the read.

I have read and really liked your writings until this story. I am not a big fan os stroke stories and prefer mom/son exclusivity. This to me just seems too far fetched.

Just couldnt contain until the end of the story. Had to releave in the middle.

"I swore she was looking at my crotch. No, that was nuts"

This cracked me up. :D

Would love to hear about this MILF getting more from Derek and dad/hubby. Maybe they go on a vacation, run into some other young males? Videos of mom being a true slut for young cocks. Mom helps governor get re-elected?

kid on the block. What else needs to be said.

It was great! Up to your usual standards. More soon please!

DEFINETLY HOTTTTT POST..ESPECIALLY TOTAL FAMILY..SAME BED...YOUR SCENERIOS AND DIALOGUE WERE TERRIFIC...ONLY MISSING ELEMENT TO REALLY MAKE THIS STORY SIZZLE..WAS HAVING DEREK & DAD..GET INTO SOME HOT BI...WITH MOM DIRECTING AND PARTICIPATING..URGING HER GUYS ON WITH TOTAL SEX-CHARGED INSTRUCTIONS..JUST AS DAD DID WITH DEREK AND MOM..AS A TOTALLY SEX CHARGED WOMAN/MOM..WITH MY OWN DEREK AND HOT STUD HUBBY/DAD...NOTHING BIGGER TURN-ON THEN TOTAL FAMILY ACTION WATCHING AND BEING IN THE MIDDLE OF OUR ADULT SON AND HIS DAD IN HOT STUD BI ACTION WITH ME TOTALLY BEING REWARDED WITH MANY SHOTS OF STUD JUICE OVER ALL OF ME..AND "OTHER PLACES"

CONTINUE AND MAKE THIS THE BEST SERIES EVER.....HAPPY HOLIDAYS

Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son Mom/son

VERY HOT ... best story ever ... like it so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

my voting: a new parents/son story ... starting when peeking ... riding reverse, leaning back, fully open for two ... bold son, entering, licking her during hubby is still inside her, squating, double-pussy-penetration, deep, fast, rough ... all in silence, no words are spoken ... cleaning ... doing it and leaving ... a little bi-action

THAT WUD BE SO FANTASTIC !!!

Excellent writing, as always. And super hot! Daddy/daughter please!!!

VOTE for parents/son

Would like to have more of son , dad and mom . Maybe ome with daughter !!!!

Purrrfect I was there with them. MMMMMMMM

Amazing story.

Maybe mix in some father/son

Really?

After what he has seen what his dad does to her and how he talks to her?

He'll never respect her again, especially after joining in

Stick with your regular efforts. You're much better at them than at this! 3* at best

Made me laugh in a positive way. Thank god you didn't have them high five each other during. 5* as usual

you are a master story teller and make your readers feel as if they are part of the action. I loved this story and hope you keep stretching your imagination and pushing the limits. thank you for you!

What a wild and torrid lust-filled affair b/t two middle aged sexual deviants and their son! I know in a way it sounds kinda sick, but minga, what I would have given to do the same thing with my hot mom and dad when I was younger lad! This was a super hot read, that made me feel like I was in the room watching it all unfold as well. So hot, that I blew my load before I was even able to finish the story! Such dirty and taboo fantasies are so exhilarating!

loved story just need to have daughter to join in also. Alittle girl on girl action, but keep boys straight.

Agreed with many others, would love to see some dad/son bi action. Hot!

Great story. Liked the fact that you kept the father/son straight. Loved how the mom was a slut for both of her guys. Keep em cumming LC!!

Excellent story. One of my favorites here. The cause of many fantasies! Thank you so much!

one of the best...they really hammered poor old mom...brilliant and your imigination is incredibly vivid....awesome..

Incredible story. Very micely done.

This is the hottest story I have ever read. More mother, father, son please.

Could have been a terrific story ... it was there, but the force where there should have been soft love, destroyed it for me.

...is another story or series starring a son with his mom AND dad. Such stories are far more rare than son-mom, but for me so much hotter when they don't start with the inevitable "my dad died (or divorced, or ran out and left us, etc".)

There's a lot to be said for pure smut . When it brings up old memories , it's just the best . I was always a perv . I don't know how Mom survived it . I was never a "little" boy . I'm now 8.5" . Dad was fuckin' HUGE . Had to be at least 12" and as big around as my wrist . Needless to say , I love to watch people fuck . It was later in life that I learned that I love to be watched . This story tickled all those nerves .

Amazingly hot. Good job.

Yes, it was beyond reason, probability, and possibility...but freakin' great!!

With one thing I don't like. I hate when women are called whores, sluts, pigs etc..

Just because they enjoy sex.

Sex is normal and in families, beautiful.

If I love a woman, I don't call her foul names, neither does our son.

Great story. Very hot.

First story I've read on here hot enough and just long enough for me to coax 3 loads of ball juice out of a pair of very empty, albeit satisfied pair of grateful testicles. I held off for 4 days and about 40 various stories, during that time, and this one finally made it worth the wait. Thanks the welcomed relief. 5 stars!

I would love to have my 24 yr old step-son do that with us!!!!

Great story and well written. You should have made the son give the father a thank you blowjob for letting him fuck his mother.

Is ALWAYS mother son. Thanks for your contributions to my life

This story is a fantastic dream. I've read it three times and probably will again. It made me cum 3 times while reading it. It has every thing a man could want. The only thing that could be added is to have Derek give his father a thank you blow job for letting him fuck his mom.

Absolutely a masterpiece! A chapter 2 is definitely needed.

Not just a chapter 2... Why not 7 more? 😁😁😁 the shower, the garage, an abandoned theme park wherin they meet another threesome incestuous family. Ooh the damn possibilities... 😏😏😏

Very erotic. Excellent sex Would like to see more!

What a hot dirty story. I loved it. Such a turn on to have hot mom who loves cock

Plz keep them coming

Needs to be made into a film!

I too had threeaome with my wife and my 16years son

It's amazing to be in family

Karen was Nicole's/Nikki's rock after her husband died and they obviously had genuine feelings for each other. Just because Karen realised that she loves her son Kenny also and caves his dick as she discovered she is actually bisexual is no reason to throw her love for Karen under the bus. I think the mature thing will be to have the three of them sit together and Nicole/Nikki admits that she likes both of them equally and they can decide if they can accept she likes both of them and have a threesome, or walk out of her life if they can't accept her feelings. If they both truely love her, then they both will stay, share her and enjoy the situation.

So my review ended up on the wrong story somehow, but what I said is true. Satisfying My Mother will be better if Karen's love wasn't thrown away like that at the end.

Your writing is brilliant as usual. I really wish you will start doing sequels for your stories as a lot of them deserve them as they are that good but have lose ends to tie up.

Wow, my tongue is hanging out after this story. Great job. Follow up please. Can't wait for more of this.

The only thing I did not like was the domineering father. Would have preferred if they had been more equal.

Very hot

You're a very talented writer & definitely my favorite on this site. Thank you very much again for a great read.

The best i ever read, i would like some more like this

Excellent piece of work. Do write similar hot stories of Mother Don incest like this one.

A very good story. I like the mom/son stories or like this one a family mom/dad and son.

My Dad was a construction worker and traveled to where the work was. My mother invited me to their bed any time he was working out of town. It was unbelievable!

This story is similar to my experiences long before computers.

You put it all in bravo!!! Masterful looking forward to the next read. Don't keep us waiting!

This was one of the hottest incest stories I have ever read. I'd like to see your write a father daughter story next.

This is my favorite story on the whole site. When will you make a sequel?

too much use of the word "pig" to suit me.

Loved. Need a dad daughter story. Story such as these are really good. Hope you write more of these in future

This was a great experience, I couldn't stop reading it.... can't wait for more..... hopefully won't have to wait too long.

Too bad Derek doesn't have a twin sister!

How did they put it? That was Amazing! Once I got into it I couldn’t stop reading it! Would also like to see more and hopefully Derek gets a chance of one on one with mommy slut.

Awesome story. Would love to see a continuation.

WOW!

Most of your work is mother/ son, I'd like a daddy/daughter story with possible addition of the mother or son... what the hell it could become a family affair and include all 4.

Thanks for sharing.

Interesting concept, but calling her a pig, and slut constantly, not really my thing...

But then I'm more in the romance style writing...

Absolutely the best story I've ever read on here. Looking forward to more "pure, unadulterated smut".

Wow truly amazing read probably the best in a long time absolutely incredible

Loved except did not like her being called a pig, that’s not nice.

Good story tho I dislike the use of "pig" please keep sharing and I'd like a daddy/daughter story

pretty " f" ing good. made me come without even touching myself. wife walked into the room and we "made it" for the next 15 minutes, without. a stop. Didn't know I could do that anymore, at age 82 !!

Amazing hot story. Loved how he always called her mom. It made it that much hotter.

Please add a chapter to this where mom and Derek get together just by themselves. Maybe add other family members, aunt, nephew, niece....

A whole family fuck fest.

As for calling mom pig, don't listen to the other comments, mom likes it.

Thanks

This is just begging for a follow-up. Please don't leave us hanging. Is this a one-time thing or not? 10 stars!