All Comments on 'Sharkbait Ch. 36-40'

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creammakercreammakeralmost 4 years ago
Alexander Corvinus...

... "Now that's a name I have not heard in a long time. A very long time". - To quote Ben Kenobi

Wabagoon1171Wabagoon1171almost 4 years ago

Vicki’s mate is a vampire?

unctadskunctadskalmost 4 years ago

I think Brian have some vamp link, Just after the attack happened, the contract came out due to ego hurt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
WOW!

Things are hotting up now. Please make the next installment quick its an incredible storyline.

tattooed_cowgirl15tattooed_cowgirl15almost 4 years ago
Uhh...what???????

Kinda lost with the vampires coming into it but keeping track. Wonder who put the bounty out probably bitch and ball-less bastard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sharkbait fan?

I am hoping for no vamp mates. However one of the merefolks? Perfect! And keeps our beloved Sharkbait, around the water. Bodyglove could be owned by the vamps, and they are just looking out for their new cash Wolf. Now as to the hit on our Sharkbait? Remember the asshat in Hawaii? Could have been another coven's cash cow. But please No vamp mates.

SensitiveHandsSensitiveHandsalmost 4 years ago

Oh My! You twisted so and so! Never saw that coming! Vampires???!!! Please post the next chapter soon!!!

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 4 years ago

I was half expecting weresharks or merfolk, but vampires will do, I suppose. Good work with expositing your version of vampires; there are so many versions nowadays (some more vampiric than others). Can't wait to see where this goes (at this point, I'm guessing a vampire's bedchambers [surely, they're too formal to call it a bedroom]).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Vampiires use litter boxes.

Cats are just dumbed down vamps! Murderers in the night who torture there prey, Incapable of meaningful interaction or loyal behavior even within their own species. Conversely, vampires smell bad, as do their cat boxes, display no moral code and sleep all day! Please don't mix the cats and dogs in sexual relationships. Rant over, I readily admit that I don't care for cats, or vamps, in the form their personnas are most often developed; and I don't think either are entertaining in "dog" stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Please don't let her mate be a vampire. Interesting twist, but human would be better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Crew names

You had me cracking up with the names of the crew.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting twist

Well, that took a turn. Get it? Vampires? Turned? Never mind.

Keep it up, and stick to your planned story regardless of pressure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sharkbait

Again I wait with baited breath.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
chef Dee Boyar

I see what you did there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great plot story line , but can't me up with some original names, one would be funny but 3 and 4 names from populare movies?

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

You are doing a great job .

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